ODST Specialized Strike Team Ruby

[Dark-F137]

ODST Strike Team Ruby is five-man (four before 2552) ODST Specialized Strike Team, definitely reserved for the capture or elimination of High-Value Targets and the generally risky operations-- Even by ODST standards. The team was formed in 2541 nigh-immediately after the Battle of San Angeles. Formed in response to the large amount of HVTs and other risky operations the Trust threat posed, it has performed nigh-flawlessly in the field. For the large part of it's existence, the team has been stationed on The King Raven, under commandof Jennifer Frost. The team consists of the following Members: "The Boss" -- Long range specialist Captain Jackson "Epsilon" Traimson. He commands the team, and wields any long-range rifle to deadly extent, preferring the M99 Gauss-powered Special Applications Scoped Rifle. Despite preference, he usually uses an SRS99 AM Rifle, with a built-in range finder that suggests a zero, calculating bullet drop. "The Shotgunning Irishman"-- CQC specialist Kael d'Evelyn. Any close-range confrontation with this man is considered suicidal. Even when disarmed, his stature and skill in hand to hand along with his inherent strength is enough to easily kill an enemy. Prepared or not. He wields the M90 8-gauge shotgun "The Enforcer"-- Matt Dristian. While Kael may be scary, Matt is a living death threat. While calm and collected, he can easily tear through enemy defenses-- Efficient, powerful, and downright scary. He wields the BR55HBSR for his purposes. "The Eliminator"-- Jesse Radus. Radus had personally served alongside a similar team-- "Fire team Harmony"-- Before joining Ruby. He specializes in demolitions, and wields the MA5 ICWS to it's full potential. "The Ghost"-- Infiltration Specialist Aiden Maythers. You know that awkward moment when the power goes out and people around you start dying out of nowhere? That was Aiden. Born in 2525, he is by far the youngest in the group, but is exceptional at quiet ops, wielding the M7S. Lights out.

[Naked Crook]

Good bios. I do like the characters, They are very dynamic from one another. I do have one minor nitpick, and I mean it is very minor. My problem is with "The Boss" and his choice of weapon. That is a very impractical weapon to carry around and use on the battle field. Given the design of the weapon, it seems to be single shot, and would prove to have an incredible degree of potential collateral damage. Picture this: Rub Squad is on a ship, and The Boss decides to fire his Guass Sniper. If he missed his target, that projectile will drive through walls, potentially killing anyone in its path. Worst case scenario, you put that round through a window, or in the outer hull of your interior...and everyone gets sucks into space. Good job Boss...you just murdered your entire team...and everyone else. This guy should be using a standard Sniper rifle for most application, only using the M99 when absolutely necessary. Nighthawk has a similar weapon, and the only time he has used it was outdoors, against a Scarab. Otherwise, he keeps that shit locked away for safety. I would rethink this.

[Dark-F137]

Do note that I said he PREFERS it. I didn't say he uses it constantly. A.J. Johnson fired one from the skid of a Hornet. It's a ten-roudner. It's not gigantic. However, your point is valid. I'll edit.

[Hells Sniper]

I like the team, seems like they're gonna do a lot of ass kicking. Looking forward to seeing them in action.

[Dark-F137]

Well we gotta get SARP done first. But thanks, I really appreciate the feedback.