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Default 04-08-2011
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so im in a band now, aaaand i wrote this song a few minutes ago. I got the inspiration for it after a walk in the rain to get bread from the convenience store across the street. I got the first line in my head, wrote it down and it took off. Enjoy



This Empty World
By: Me
It's raining, but nobody gives a damn,
Everyone's preoccupied with what to do and how to do it,
The only ones that care are me and you,
But you can't be bothered, and I,
Well I can't get you off my mind

Is it imagery, or is it make-believe?

There's no one left in this entire world, but no one seems to care,
The only goddamn things that are left in here,
Are the questions I have, and the answers you never had,

The clouds in the sky, they reflect everything, that is all we ever were,
But in this empty world, only the tracks are left,
That I made when I walked, alone

Is it imagery, or is it make-believe?

There's nothing left in this goddamn world, but nobody seems to care,
The only things that remain are questions I asked,
And the answers you never gave

The dust on the roads, the light in your eyes,
When you see my side of the situation,
You might think you relate, but there's no way that you could understand

There's nobody left in this goddamn world, but nobody seems to care,
The only ones that remain are you and me,
And I think this might work after all,
I think this might work after all,
I think this just might work if you follow me...

so yeah, feedback is appreciated

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even though im not really into the same type of music its good yo lol

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That was good, I liked it.

It had meaning behind it, or so it seemed, every song needs that.

Great Job Tyler!

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I personally really like it. I was expecting a rhyme but there wasn't and it's ok. If you pt some music and sang it, I'd jam to it

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thanks guys, and yeah, this is a very personal song for me. im working on the guitar part now

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Post the audio from the guitar for it...

and if you are feeling brave...sing it.

Good lyrics.

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thanks man. ill try

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WOW! tyler this was great.. and we need songs like this.. with MEANING! great job! i read it like 3 times i really like it!

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Very deep.

I actually want to hear this, in song form.

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