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http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/tool/lostkeys.html
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/tool/rosettastoned.html

^ read those two sets of lyrics, understad what the story is. This is a 911 call made by a severely traumatized man, in much the same fashion as Lost Keys, minus the DMT/LSD. It doesnt yet have a title, feel free to make recommendations.

"Hello 911?"
"Yes?"
"I...."
"You what, sir?"
"i don't even fuckin know, I saw this guy with a thin face and a pointed nose and pale complexion....."
"Sir, please slow down, I ca-"
"And he had this..... thing..... coming.... out of his mouth.... it had a FUCKING EYE!!!! *retching noises*"
"What?"
"And it was all black and red and fleshy and ALIVE. And there was this.... knob.... or something, on the back of his neck"
"Sir, what are you-?"
"And there was this man, with charred-looking grey skin.... except his hands, they were snow white, and on each of his 7 fingers there was a ring of pure blackness like you were looking through everything into FUCKING SPACE!!!"
"Sir, you aer wasting a 911-"
"And he was reaching for the Knob thing..... HE turned it, and the guys FACE bulged... and BULGED, and kept enlarging, I saw it SPLIT, and I blacked OUT"
"Sir, why did you call 911?"
"I..... I don't rightly..... KNOW."




Mindfucked much? XD
anyway, im working on the actual song that will go with this. ill put it up lator

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these can be lyrics?



how

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well, if you'd listened to Lost Keys, you would know it was a conversation between a doctor and nurse about a traumatized man, and his story is told in Rosetta Stoned, which is a legit song.

This is meant to be the Lost Key-esque part. whats comes next is the legit song, so, naturally, it will be as fucked up as this

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i just read the lyrics, and then youtubed the song....

the lyrics are fucked up, but very interesting at the least.

the song....... complete ass

you cant even hear the fucking lyrics.... disregarding the vocals that sound like the guy is choking on an elephant dick, the instramentals cover up the lyrics.....


why even have lyrics then? i wouldnt mind juts listening to the guitar and drums

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did you listen to the entire 11:11? cause yeah the first couple verses are spoken supah fast, it takes awhile to get it, but after that the vocals get pretty clear.

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oh nah lol only like the first 2 mins lolololol

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lol. yeah, the song i make wont be quite like Rosetta Stoned. mainly cause my band's drummer isnt as good as Tool's drummer XD

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