Mike's new book! SAW:No way home

[MadMIkE]

Im a big fan of SAW.And Ive always thought of taking it into my own hands...(Thats what she said)So I thought of a book about it.Indeed.I did.LETS GET THIS THIS GENOCIDAL TRAIN ON THE TRACKS! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 0-Why me? Why are we here?You may have asked that question many times,or been asked the question.You cant decide something thats against your will...but with Jigsaw.The man that imprisoned me in an Asylum hellhole...kept me there...to teach me something.To show me the terrible person I was,and to purge it from with sick and twisted experimental traps and hazards,all of them...FATAL.I escaped all that,but the police,didnt take kindly to me when I wanted to stay quiet about the whole situation...my name...is Simon Gross,and this,is the story.Of the puzzle. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Too be continued until I get the next chapter posted

[Naked Crook]

You have a few errors... Always put a space after a period and comma You have a few redundant commas Of (at the end) should not have a capital O Otherwise, pretty interesting.

[MadMIkE]

Thanks.Ill improve all that in later chapters.

[schectergitarrguyy]

this is giving me an idea, i kinda wanna write a little story. its be fun. and i can hsow all you people who think i dont know grammar

[Naked Crook]

Originally Posted by schectergitarrguyy this is giving me an idea, i kinda wanna write a little story. its be fun. and i can hsow all you people who think i dont know grammar Yep...you know your grammar...and spelling LOL...JK man.

[schectergitarrguyy]

lol, but if i do write on ill be sureto go over it a few times before posting it

interesting mike