Dawn.

[Hells Sniper]

Dawn approached the small town, buried in the valley on the edge of the stateline. A lone man, the same unknown man we discussed earlier, wore his hat and watched the sun rise. He stood just outside town hall, lighting a ciggarette and taking a long drag. He looked around at the town, the cars beginning to bustle around and the fast food restaurants still up and running. He sighed as he stared at the fast food joint. Soon, men came running from their houses to get to their cars. Most, carrying suitcases with a raincoat. It always rained in this small town, no matter what, everyone was prepared for it. The man looked to his left, town hall. He watched the sun rise over it and just stared, taking another drag of his ciggarette. The man watched the mayor exit town hall, being approached by reporters and video cameras. See, lately things have been...changed. A new mayor, new people and many new additions to the town. Consider the fast food joints, the new architecture, much more advanced than the original houses. However, this man has been here since 1974, he came after the war ended. The town established in 1967. He was always a quiet man, keeping to himself, but only a few handful of people new what truly happened to him. They praised him as a war hero. Now, these people are all gone..except for one. This one person is a woman, who is married to the wrong person. ~~~ So..this is pretty much turning into a narration of this one man, as you can see, his background is a bit more explored, being in the war, and he is quite old. The town's background is also expanded.We can also know that the town is new and the timeline is in the 1970's. I will go more into the town details in the next part, and you will know the name. I will write more, it's just a matter of where I'm going with it, if I can link it all together. ~~~ Oh and for those who are reading and are giving me comments, suggestions, and even criticism, Thank You.

[Naked Crook]

Very detailed...perhaps add some physical details of the man. Get an idea of what he looks like.

[Hells Sniper]

Yes, I will be adding that in the next part or so...for know it is still up to how you determine him.