My own Creation Story

[lynksys]

Tell me what you think. I was bored and wrote this in about 40 mins. ________________________________________________________________--- In the beginning, there was a large mass of matter known as the universe. It was expanding forever and reaching out to limits that were impossible to distance. At the center of this matter, there was a Divine Being. This being was the creator of all this matter, but did not have the time to organize and develop it because he was fighting a rebellion that had occurred with his servants. The leader of this rebellion was fiery like sun and did not want to be under the Divine Being’s control any longer. Eventually, the Rebel and his followers were overcome and cast out of the Divine Being’s dwelling place. They flew with such furry that they appeared as a shooting star across the matter filled universe. As they flew, they attracted and fused around them the matter that was in the universe. The matter continued to compact and form together into spherical shapes, and the heavier the shapes got, the colder and slower the started to move. Eventually, they stopped moving and were doomed to face an eternity trapped inside their shells of matter. These rebellious servants realized their folly and wept like a baby that has been neglected. The Divine Creator heard their cries and took pity on them, so He pulled them in around him. However, he could not allow them to come free from their shells of rock and ice lest they rise up against Him again. These Rebels trapped in their planets of matter continued to revolve around the Divine Creator for all of eternity, doomed by eternal separation and to be devoid of all life forever. Eventually, the Divine Creator healed and mended his own domain and decided to add small pleasures to it such as trees, mountains, and rivers. From these trees he picked delicious fruits that shone like rubies and other precious gems. But the Creator realized that he was lonely in his vast dwelling place, so he thought of a solution to his problem. He did not want to create beings that could become powerful, but he did not want beings that were feeble or dumb. He decided he would create a being with basic knowledge. Eventually, this new creation would be tested in small ways, and with each test, the Creator would teach him new things. Then this new creation would use knowledge as a key to become more powerful and magnificent. The Creator picked up a handful of dirt and formed the new creation in His own image. Then, He breathed life into the creation and watched with pleasure as the new creation looked around to examine the world around him. The Creator spoke out to the new creation and said, “I will teach you everything and I will be a shield for you. All I ask is that you obey me. You shall be called Man.” Man spoke back to the Creator and agreed to the terms. As a result, the Creator smiled upon Man, and from His smile came light. This light was so strong, it pushed much of the matter that was wandering around and caused them to contract. Since these new object were not the result of evil, they burned with the intensity of a great fire and brought warmth to the universe. Things continued in happiness for the Creator. However, He soon noticed that Man was not happy. When He asked Man what was the cause of his unhappiness, Man replied that he was too lonely. The Creator realized his folly. If a Divine Being like Himself could get lonely, how much more so would a simple creation in the vast universe? The Creator set out for work. The ground burst forth and from the ground came out various animals and birds. The rivers cried out water animals and fish. Soon, the Creator’s domain was alive and moving with all sorts of animals. Man was overjoyed at this new event and quickly went out to examine and name all the new things that were produced. The Creator smiled down upon His creation once more. Nevertheless, Man was still not happy. The Creator once more intervened and asked what was wrong. The Man explained his woes how none of the new creations were fitting for him. The Creator set out to work once and again, and he created Woman from the Man’s side. The Creator told Man that the woman would be the leaves for his branches, and that in peace between the two, they would be most efficient. Once again, the Creator set expectations. The Man was to never strike the Woman out of anger because the Woman was weaker than Man, and the Man was to be her shield and protector. Man agreed to the requirements, and all was well once more. But there was still a problem. Matter was everywhere and the particles taunted all of creation. Man begged the Creator to do something about it, but the Creator had no solution. He could not simply make the matter go away, He would have to do something with it, and there was nothing left to build. The Man left in a rage and went to the Woman. Instead of finding comfort in her like he expected, he came home to Nagging and Complaining. This broke his temper and before he could stop himself, he struck her. The Woman cried tears, and as soon as the droplets hit the ground, they turned to ice. She continued to cry, and the Creator saw what had happened. In rage, He ran out to do justice. He shouted and yelled, and the Matter cowered into clumps that fell to the earth. These clumps continued to pile higher and higher, and the air started to become clearer. When the Creator arrived, he saw the Woman being comforted by Man, and He was moved. He knew that this act could not go unpunished, but the Creator felt pity for Man, so He lessened the punishment. The Creator struck the ground with such force that the world that was created for Man to dwell in broke off from His domain. This world fell from the Heavens slowly and merged with one of the Rebel’s spherical worlds. The Man’s world almost completely wrapped around the Rebels world and covered it like a blanket on a bed that is too big. Unfortunately, the world was too far away from the Creator to receive and warmth, so the world started to freeze over, just like it was before. The Creator had to think of a solution quickly, or else His hard work would all be destroyed. He remembered what Man had said to him about matter floating around everywhere. He acted quickly. The matter was all brought closely together and formed into a super-dense ball. The Creator breathed a sigh of relief onto the ball, thus allowing it to catch on fire. He tossed the ball close enough to the World to allow things to become warm enough again, but not too close that it would catch on fire. As expected, the Rebel inside the world tried to get warmer by moving closer to the fireball, but the Creator would not allow it, so the World started revolving around fireball. Ice had already formed up in some places, but as it melted, it dispersed throughout the world and covered most of it, creating the Oceans and Seas. Interestingly enough, because of the way the World was positioned around the Fireball, the center of the surface of the World was warm, while it got colder as one moved further away from the center until the eventually arrived at frozen masses of land, which as now known as the Arctic and the Antarctic circles. This is why the World looks the way it does. Interestingly enough, there are storms and natural disasters that happen which cannot seem to be explained. These events are just the result of a weakened Rebel trying to get out from the center of the World.