[Naked Crook]

OK...large wall of text. Content is much better, but the delivery needs work. Break up that wall of text, and sort the content out. It is tough to read. There is no break, and there is no carriage returns where I can easily glance over information. You need paragraphs in there to make it easier to read. But like I said, from what I can tell, the content is good...just PLEASE break up that wall of text into easier to read paragraphs and have all the information sorted out, so military information all sits in one paragraph, while personal information has its own paragraph.