[Naked Crook]

Originally Posted by Erex Ok... Well it was my first. Your first...what? Are you telling me you have never written ANYTHING before in your life? You have never written a book report, or an essay, or a short story for English class... That is not an excuse. The ability to write transcends the genera you are writing about. THis lacked basic story structure. I can help you with this...but this...thing...you wrote...this is not canon. I refuse to accept this as backstory for something as complex as NHRPG. This "NTB"...never happened.