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Default 04-19-2010 		  #10
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Killer is right in his assessment. You have a good idea of how to go from here but this is only a synopses, it does not critique anything. I am not saying its bad, it just needs a bit of work.

Write a bit more. I know you can dish out a grade A review if you put an hour or so into it.

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