[Kairu]

My personal thoughts are that the double and short-ish posting is confusing the hell out of me. I've just been skipping over them, not really caring so much. I guess that's just the detailed writer in me, but I feel there's... not a steady conflict yet. There's just bounty hunters and the Republic. I feel like the CIS is unattended to. And as much as my character Th'isk is turning to the Republic, I've been doing the research trying to keep the Clone Wars on as much focus as possible. As for a part 2, I feel we need a subtantial number of posts and a flowing, conflicting story. And correct me if I am wrong, but wasn't it stated earlier that double posting isn't allowed? We do have an edit button you know.