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Default 04-06-2010 		  #5
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Good review Ken. I would suggest you fix some of the problems. Namely grammar. try to avoid the WTF acronym. Good content, just needs to be polished.

Also Ken, I changed the rules of the contest. You need another 81 words to get over the 1000 word minimum. You have 919 words.

(Sorry...I am a grammar Nazi)

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